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At first glance,
A sullen, unknown glimpse
Of petrified insecurities.
The hollow heart becomes reborn,
With a subtle hint of surprise.

The cherry to finish a sundae,
The last candle to complete a cake,
Anything full of jovial bliss.
The classic love story brought to life:
Bewildered, brave, complete.

The second glance,
Filled a half empty glass
Of creamy delight.
Falsified fear is simply
Placed aside like a useless garment.

Like two rings forever,
Linked together with a clank.
The mind wanders frantically,
Whizzing by like a jet plane,
Zipping joyously in the air.

It shifts from a zone
Of utmost chaos,
A frenzy of feasting beasts,
And into order,
An angelic, tasteful pleasure.

Sweet dreams exchanged
From even the simplest of pecks,
Lips barely touching,
A burning desire eating away
At the core of a mighty lover.

Even the weakest of knees buckle,
Feeling the omnipotent prowess,
Of utter ecstasy.
The imagination taking flight
Into a world of carnal temptations.

Enlightened hues entwine,
Two souls,
Shaping and forming,
Into one.

What one thinks,
So does the other.
Not a word had to be spoken,
But hushed whispers still emit,
Those velvety hands interlocking.

Excitement.
©2006-2009 ~AToxicDelight
:iconatoxicdelight:

Author's Comments

There are serveral parts to IEO. I am just going to post the first (possibly the second as well) part of this rather lengthy poem involving (If you didn't already guess yet) love, or the beginning stages all the way to the end. It it basically detailed in a way to make the reader be able to click with the poem, let their minds drift into a dream world they may already be involved in.

IEO is a saying my boyfriend and I use because we're children at heart. Not meant for that gushy, silly, gibberish some people use!

Anywho, as I get off into a tangent, it is based on the beginning stage of love, and then some. Enjoy.

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:iconwhist:
amazing... sometimes i wonder "damn she really is smart.." :P IEO

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:iconatoxicdelight:
I'm a genius. :D! No, not raelly, but its fun to think that I am.
:iconwhist:
lawl ur adorable

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:iconshaynesoutlet:
this is sweet. I love the thought of it and imagining you two... I'm in love with love...

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Except... I'm not a teenager anymore. But I didn't smoke pot!

Proud to be American, Jewish, Gay--me
:iconatoxicdelight:
Thank you. :D! Yes, this is my only warm, fuzzy love poem. ^^;
:iconshaynesoutlet:
:)

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98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
Except... I'm not a teenager anymore. But I didn't smoke pot!

Proud to be American, Jewish, Gay--me
:iconone-and-only26:
Wow! This is incredibly well written.

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:iconatoxicdelight:
:D I had great inspiration. I'm not used to writing warm and fuzzy in the least. Thank you very much.
:iconone-and-only26:
You're very welcome. lol I find it hard to write warm and fuzzy stuff too...most of the time mine sound fake.

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~*~The only limits in life are the ones we set for ourselves.~*~
:iconatoxicdelight:
I tried to get out of the hallmark zone. Haha.

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